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a cup of memory;microlight on October 19th, 2010 08:04 pm (UTC)
Spot for doumyoujitsukas
Simin: QMidoumyoujitsukas on October 19th, 2010 09:14 pm (UTC)
haha, don't worry about it. i have no clue why i said ponies. creativity is not my strong suit, you see.

but alksdjfklsdjfladskjfldksfjlsdkfjlsdjflksdjf so cuuuuuuuute. and now i'm mad i didn't get yours out faster, because i have to compete with this why why why askdlfjaklsdjfklds

i love your descriptions. dim light filtering through the blinds to throw crossbars across his frame is a gorgeous gorgeous line, and i'm ridiculously jealous of your ability to put words into a sentence and actually have it sound good.

and i love your kyuhyun. stupid little kyuhyun, thinking he can just give up zhou mi, oh, you poor poor naive thing. /pats

seriously, i can't believe you're new to this fandom. you write them so so well. ♥

i will now stop fangirling and go write yours. after i cry over it because it'll never be this good.
a cup of memory;microlight on October 20th, 2010 06:36 pm (UTC)
Oh, I'm relieved. XD I'm...just not good enough with these people yet to do cracky things, and I couldn't think of anywhere serious to go with that prompt. I'm glad you don't mind!

Stop that, there is no competition or basis of comparison, you are a very good writer who just doesn't write like I do, stooooooop you are distressing me ;_;

Thank you so much ;_; I write mostly because I get images in my head and then want to tell people about them, so...that's why? I'm kicking around ideas for another story that takes place in a church, just because the idea of Kyuhyun playing the organ is awesome and I want to show people it.

Ahah, I'm really happy that you like the characterizations ;_; They're slippery! Writing real people is really hard. You do it with a lot of grace and aplomb, I think. Hell, you can write people who aren't Kyuhyun and Zhou Mi and...I can't. XD I'm still learning!

I'm really excited to see yours. Feel free to throw my prompts out too if they don't suit you. No rush or pressure, though, do it whenever you have time! ♥

...no seriously stop ;_;
Simin: QMidoumyoujitsukas on October 21st, 2010 02:48 am (UTC)
distress distressssss

you should. show people it, i mean. or just show me it. :D kyuhyun would be such a gorgeous organ player.

your characterizations are seriously amazing. real people are tough, cause what we see on stage isn't actually completely them and sometimes i think we let what we want them to be like cloud how they might actually be? idek what i'm talking about anymore.

yours...has been rewritten three times. i've like, written three pages, hated it, deleted it all, and gone back. :/ you will get it though, eventually. possibly. even if i have to not do this stupid homework. (though ngl, qmi or homework really isn't competition at all).

i look forward to reading more stuff from you ♥
a cup of memory;: pic#105189568microlight on October 21st, 2010 01:29 pm (UTC)
;_;

XD I will, when I'm done. It's really fun to think about, but I have to hash out a lot more details before I can start.

I...do an embarrassing amount of research. /coughs So that's probably why. You're totally right (and making perfect sense), and some of it is easier to see through than other things, but it still makes you wonder, right? The most annoying part is that people are contradictory, so sometimes they'll do things that I never expected, but if I try to write that aspect of their character in people will tell me it's wrong. So it's very frustrating.

;_; oh man, I'm so touched that you're putting so much thought and hard work into that. Thank you so much! I look forward to reading your stuff too XD...but please do your homework ;_; I am patient, I can wait.
/人◕‿‿◕人\chrysa on October 19th, 2010 08:07 pm (UTC)
spot for me too >.>
/人◕‿‿◕人\: vienna 」 straight to centerchrysa on October 27th, 2010 05:06 am (UTC)
Okay this is really late so there's probably nothing I can say I haven't said to you already but:

KYUHYUN YOU CAN DO IT. I BELIEVE IN YOU. ZHOU MI TOTALLY WANTS IN YOUR PANTS BELIEVES IN YOU TOOOOO
a cup of memory;: pic#105189568microlight on October 27th, 2010 05:07 am (UTC)
........

/laughing so hard right now
lizzie135: MiMivictoriasong on October 19th, 2010 08:39 pm (UTC)
Beautiful! I love it! Hopefully they get a happy ending. :D
a cup of memory;: pic#104714740microlight on October 20th, 2010 06:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! And I'm sure they do :D
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a cup of memory;: pic#104458997microlight on October 20th, 2010 06:45 pm (UTC)
Leeteuk was fun, ahah. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for commenting ♥
yumika_893: qmiyumika_893 on October 19th, 2010 09:23 pm (UTC)
!! <3
I need more than this girrrl D;
please continue? ;_;
a cup of memory;: pic#104483269microlight on October 20th, 2010 06:46 pm (UTC)
I didn't even want to write this much, ahah! I was really mad when it got longer than three scenes.

...Maybe? No promises though.
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a cup of memory;: pic#104483269microlight on October 20th, 2010 06:53 pm (UTC)
...Did you read my first QMi fic and get spoiled? ;;XD My fics are usually 1-2k words; the other fic I wrote is the longest thing I've written in my whole life and...I'm still recovering, honestly. I actually wanted this to be even shorter but I needed more room.

I'm so happy to hear that you liked my descriptions and characterization! I feel like this pairing calls for a denser, more atmospheric writing style. I don't know why. Maybe because they're so in love? /shrugs

Thank you for your comment!
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a cup of memory;: pic#104486326microlight on October 21st, 2010 07:47 pm (UTC)
Um, I hope the fic pleases you! ♥

Oh my God you read this that many times?! I-I'm so honored, thank you so much! o///o

Ahah, it seems like a lot of people tend to find a pairing they can work with and stick to it here. It's very different from my usual fandoms, but there's nothing wrong with it I suppose—we're both doing it, after all!
hannie_gee: <3hannie_gee on October 19th, 2010 10:57 pm (UTC)
This needs a sequel or continuation or whatever you wanna call it *--*

I want more~~~&heartsl♥
a cup of memory;: pic#105200249microlight on October 20th, 2010 06:54 pm (UTC)
Um, maybe? But probably not, orz. I'm glad you liked it though :D
plane rides ✈: Super Junior (no other mv)saracupcaked on October 20th, 2010 09:31 am (UTC)
I really liked this! :) It's sweet, but in that realistic, believable way because it's so Kyuhyun to be all analytical yet timid when it comes to Zhou Mi.

It would be better if he hadn't noticed, he thinks. He retracts the thought immediately.

It would, he decides, be better if he had courage.


My favourite bit, because oh Kyuhyun, waylt ♥
a cup of memory;: pic#104483269microlight on October 20th, 2010 07:14 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you thought it was realistic—I always worry about going overboard with my fluff. ._. Kyuhyun is such an adorable ball of awkward! ♥ ♥ ♥

Thank you for commenting (and quoting, omg)!
메롱 ~: ✓muriyari on October 20th, 2010 03:46 pm (UTC)
This was a delight to read! I liked the descriptions you gave, and how simple, yet how good this was. Great job!
a cup of memory;microlight on October 20th, 2010 07:15 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! ♥ ♥
ogawa_kaori: qmi love <3ogawa_kaori on October 20th, 2010 04:32 pm (UTC)
Zhou Mi, he realizes, has never turned him away. Not once.

One of my favorite line from oh so many favorite lines in this fic! <3
This is beautiful, for the lack of better word to describe it.

Just ... ♥ it!!
a cup of memory;: pic#104714740microlight on October 21st, 2010 07:44 pm (UTC)
I'm so happy to hear that you had a lot of favorite lines, ads;lkjasr XD. Thanks for reading and commenting ♥!
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a cup of memory;: pic#104483269microlight on October 21st, 2010 07:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much!
Ciel: PR - Christian/OMGfindthesunrise on October 22nd, 2010 03:26 am (UTC)
.... you have to stop linking me to the QMi you write because damn lady, you're making me ship them.

I adore your Kyu here. There's something so honest about the progression of his thoughts and his slow realization and the way he attempts to rationalize it and just ughhhh so real. And speaking of real, the convo between Leetuk and Kyu was just jsgoaugh so sweet. And it felt genuine and awesome and your dialogue is so natural and easy and just... ghosug

STOP BEING AWESOME. That's a lie. Please keep being awesome and I'll continue being your fangirl.
a cup of memory;microlight on October 22nd, 2010 12:47 pm (UTC)
You mean all of our combined spam hasn't already made you ship them? o_o

I was really proud of the conversation between Leeteuk and Kyuhyun ;_; so I'm really glad that stood out to you.

Niichan, you flatter me too much. ;_; Thank you. I love you too bb ♥
Ciel: SHINee - Taemin/Adorkablefindthesunrise on October 22nd, 2010 03:16 pm (UTC)
Well, yes, but it's one of those things where I completely forget about them when I'm not talking to you guys about them...

... and slowly I start to think about them on my own time. DAMNIT. @3@
Chelseashuuseieki on October 25th, 2010 10:16 am (UTC)
This piece is lovely ♥ There's this subtle sense of romance behind the slice-of-life that you put into it, and the words and simplicity makes it all the more beautiful. *w* Memming this for future reading!
a cup of memory;microlight on October 26th, 2010 03:17 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it ♥
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a cup of memory;: pic#104714740microlight on November 15th, 2010 03:25 am (UTC)
Lol it took me forever to reply back so WE CAN FAIL TOGETHER or something I guess a;sldkfjaelkjrsar I'm sorry ;_;

Anyway, um, at least you don't sound so overdramatic when you write ;_; so it works out? I can't believe you quoted things ;asdlkjfalerj ;_; Also I think we basically like seeing the same things in fics (skinship references, Mi's jewelry!!, obvious people are obvious) so /high five!

I feel like Kyu would probably think himself into the floor and then get sick of it and do something. MAN OF ACTION??? Idk. I guess you'll see in the fic I'm writing you ahah XD

Anyway THANK YOU SO MUCH for commenting, you really didn't have to, I'm sorry again for taking so long and you are really awesome! ♥ ♥
catherine_leitecatherine_leite on December 23rd, 2010 07:07 pm (UTC)
aaaand.... that's how you fall in love, kyuhyun.
Ah, so wonderful...love it
a cup of memory;microlight on January 4th, 2011 12:54 am (UTC)
Thank you! ♥